📝 영상 대본: 원문 (Original Transcript) 및 교정문 (Corrected English)
| 시간 | 원문 (Original Transcript) | 교정문 (Corrected English) |
| [00:00] | oh hello everybody It's the first video and first recording in my life in the Philippines Yeah here is Philippines | Hello everybody. This is the first video and first recording of my life in the Philippines. Yes, here is the Philippines. |
| [00:14] | And uh uh uh hello everybody Great to meet you And I'm from Korea I live here Philippine uh Pant Island | Hello everybody. Great to meet you. I'm from Korea. I live here in the Philippines, on Bantayan Island. |
| [00:33] | so actually I can't speak English very well So I will try uh from time to time I want to introduce the the beauty of this island and the smile of uh the the smile of this island people and I love this island too much So as long as I can I will try uh frequently I will try to upload this video | Actually, I can't speak English very well. So, from time to time, I want to try to introduce the beauty of this island and the smiles of the people here. I love this island so much. I will try to upload videos frequently, as much as I can. |
| [01:17] | Please click like and yeah enjoy my video Thank you and I will try to go to the sea and I will I I I will try to introduce the beauty about this island | Please click 'Like' and enjoy my video. Thank you. I will try to go to the sea and introduce the beauty of this island. |
| [01:39] | I am at this moment approaching the beach So I will try to go go So uh it's the first recording actually I uh it's very hard now | I am approaching the beach right now. So I will go. This is the first recording, and actually, it's very hard right now. |
| [01:53] | So uh anyway I will try yeah good food also here So I I will try Yeah And at this moment at this moment I am a pro sorry my poor English but I will try | Anyway, I will try. There is good food here too, so I will try it. I am trying right now... Sorry for my poor English, but I will keep trying. |
| [02:17] | uh you know the purpose of this video it's uh not only the introduce the beauty of violence but also I want to enhance my English skill too So uh actually I want to study uh some more | You know, the purpose of this video is not only to introduce the beauty of the island, but also to enhance my English skills. So, I actually want to study more. |
| [02:41] | Anyway I want to I want to try explain I want to try to explain this the beauty of this island It's very very beautiful and there are many good people There are many good Filipino and uh yeah actually | Anyway, I want to try to explain the beauty of this island. It is very, very beautiful and there are many good people here. There are many good Filipinos. |
| [03:02] | in in Korea uh I am Korean as I told you uh at this moment I'm not so good the the economical or environment my environment but I will try to laughing uh I want to enjoy my uh uh before I my failure I want to uh erase my memory and uh from this island I will I want to try uh happy again happy again | I am Korean, as I told you. Right now, my economic situation and my environment in Korea are not so good. But I will try to laugh. I want to erase the memory of my previous failure and I want to try to be happy again on this island. |
| [03:43] | um I'm here actually almost and at this moment almost one year I live here almost one here uh I always try to find a good uh partner too but it's not easy you know my requirement and uh uh it's a actually the uh as long as I can you know it's the last time to find in my life it's the last time to find a a good partner so I am very careful about about that | I've actually been here for almost a year now. I always try to find a good partner, too, but it's not easy. You know, regarding my requirements... Actually, as much as I can, this is the last time in my life to find a good partner, so I am very careful about that. |
| [04:24] | So anyway it's my uh personal uh situation but uh as much as I can uh uh please contact me a good uh uh if if you please contact me through my uh comment Yeah Yeah Please leave me a comment | Anyway, this is my personal situation, but please contact me. If you would, please contact me through my comments. Yes, please leave me a comment. |
| [04:51] | And Oh okay And this one uh I I want to introduce this one This this this one uh this ship is uh um uh you know the one 1,000 pesos look around this this sea uh 1 hour maybe | Okay. And I want to introduce this one. This boat is about 1,000 pesos to look around this sea for maybe 1 hour. |
| [05:15] | Actually I retired and so my poor English me as I told you I want to I want my English skill here through uh through this video too | Actually, I retired. And because of my poor English, as I told you, I want to improve my English skills here through this video, too. |
| [05:34] | Okay uh post and uh start Actually I have an Korean channel Uh I have at this moment there are not too much uh there are not too much the audience but uh too many Koreans uh day by day I try to communicate with them | Okay. (Post and start - 문맥상 의미 불명). Actually, I have a Korean channel. Right now, there aren't too many audience members, but I try to communicate with many Koreans day by day. |
| [06:09] | in my the my my Korea channel and next time I will try to uh introduce Yeah introduce and I have many Koreans So sometimes the this channel and the Korean channel I will how how can I I will communicate and I will try to I don't negotiate together | Next time, I will try to introduce my Korean channel. I have many Koreans (viewers). So sometimes, I will try to communicate between this channel and the Korean channel. I don't know how... I will try to communicate and negotiate (or cooperate) together. |
| [06:38] | Wait a moment unique beach region in front of I uh I want to uh introduce and I want to realize this like like this ah it's uh the beach this beach I think this beach is the most uh beautiful beaches in the Philippines the most beautiful beaches that's why you know uh be before I traveled too many places in in uh the Philippine places and uh at this moment I live here | Wait a moment. I want to introduce and show this unique beach area in front of me, like this. I think this beach is one of the most beautiful beaches in the Philippines, the most beautiful beach. That's why, before, I traveled to many places in the Philippines, and now I live here. |
| [07:19] | You know the this the sunset and the sunrise sunset is this this side sunset is the most beautiful scenery as ever I see | You know, the sunset and the sunrise... The sunset on this side is the most beautiful scenery I have ever seen. |
| [07:31] | How can I and know my poor English make me hard but I want to introduce the this island and uh people so uh as I told you it's very beautiful scenery | I don't know how... My poor English makes it hard, but I want to introduce this island and its people. As I told you, it is very beautiful scenery. |
| [07:54] | beside not beside back side uh uh rear side the aim of the building the make building make uh resort or hotel and anyway uh thank you watching the thank thank you for listening watching my video uh as long as I can I will try uh the day by day and every day I will try | Beside... no, behind the building, they are making a resort or hotel. Anyway, thank you for watching my video. I will try to record day by day and every day, as much as I can. |
| [08:28] | your support and your like click like make me uh uh strong anger about this this video So I will continue because of your life | Your support and your 'Like' clicks give me the strong motivation to continue this video. So I will continue because of your support. (원문에서 'strong anger'는 'strong motivation/drive'의 의미로 추정) |
| [08:41] | but uh anyway uh see you next time See you tomorrow Thank you Thank you Oh thank thank | But anyway, see you next time. See you tomorrow. Thank you. |
📚 학습 포인트 요약
귀하의 영어는 핵심적인 메시지 전달력이 매우 훌륭합니다. 특히 "I want to erase my memory and from this island I will I want to try happy again" ([03:26])와 같은 문장들은 진솔한 감정을 담고 있습니다.
주로 발생하는 문법 오류는 다음과 같습니다.
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관사 (a/an/the) 누락: 명사 앞에 관사가 자주 생략됩니다. (예:
here is Philippines→here is **the** Philippines) -
동사 형태 오류: 단수/복수형이나 동사 자체의 선택이 어색합니다. (예:
I will try to laughing→I will try to laugh/the most beautiful beaches→the most beautiful beach또는one of the most beautiful beaches) -
전치사 오류: 전치사 선택이 틀립니다. (예:
beauty about this island→beauty **of** this island) -
불필요한 중복: 동사나 구문이 반복됩니다. (예:
I want to I want to try explain→I want to try to explain) -
어휘 선택 오류: 'strong anger'처럼 적절하지 않은 단어가 사용되었습니다. (의도: motivation, drive, strength)
이러한 점들을 유의하며 매일 영어 일기를 꾸준히 쓰시면 실력이 빠르게 향상될 것입니다. 계속 응원하겠습니다!